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I found it interesting that he said to try to speak in threes because of the rhythm it adds. It seems kind of like a cliché to me to do that so often when he said to avoid clichés as well and it just kind of contradicts it. It can help me to become a better writer because of where he said to use an active voice as with the hurricane example. It doesn’t take much time to add just a bit of thought to change a sentence slightly from something quite obvious to say to make it sound a little bit more dramatic, and it would add a lot to the story for the viewers.